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The Dirt Path Not TakenMy best friend and I were going through town one Sunday. Michael was off of work and was taking me to Old Chicago like he always did. As we went along, Michael stopped at the edge of the town. In front of us lay two roads; the one on the right would take us to the nearby city and Old Chicago. The other… well, I didn’t know where that path lead yet. “I’d like to see where this other road leads to,” Michael said as he started down the path. I didn’t reply, but I went along with him. The road wound around a lake and eventually became nothing but a dirt path. I hoped that Michael and I would be able to find our way home.The Dirt Path Not Taken by Whovian178
The lake eventually fell out of sight behind us. As I looked down at the ground, I noticed that it didn’t look like anyone had been down here in ages. It was a rather peaceful dirt road and I was enjoying the walk until Michael stopped suddenly. I came to a halt as well. He walked me over to a nearby tree and left me there before g
Anonymous SubjectAnonymous Subject by Whovian178
I’ve just got to let the words fall out,
For the person whom this poem’s about
Deserves all I’m about to say
In every possibly imaginable way.
For they have changed my life so much,
and it seems that I could not have escaped their touch
even if I had tried.
And to think that without them, I could have died.
It’s really a long story, you see,
And I’d rather not make them out to be
Some hero whose image will never worsen
For they are just a normal person.
People dream of heroes and gods,
But little do they know the greater odds
Of finding their own hero around them
Who is worth more than any jewel or gem.
My hero in life, I don’t see like before,
I’ve been forced to move past that open door.
Yet they still remain in that same spot,
In the doorway of my home I never forgot.
So when I return, I know I will see
The hero that I long to be.
So the question still remains:
Who is this poem about?
It’s too bad you will never find out.
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